CV and Copy Editing

This is my current CV, which shows a variety of experience and transferable skills such as customer service, IT skills including Microsoft Office, Windows and Apple Mac, basic Adobe Creative Suite skills (including Adobe Acrobat), writing, quick (and self taught) learning to continue personal development and expansion of knowledge.

This is an extract of a beta-editing story from the Harry Potter section of  I use a different colour to edit I justify my re-write in the writing, whilst keeping the original in black for easy reference. This was completed over email. 
Beta Reading Example; Copy Editing